I remember
you and me
tangled in those sheets,
dismantling each others’
armors and weapons
built through a lifetime
of heart break.
Your hands grabbed
the walls of my subconscious,
fondling the lining of emotions.
And in an instance
you found
all of my essence
swimming in the blue
of the duvet cover
exposed to each particle
of your soul
without the fabric
of skin
to hide beneath
every secret of our pasts.
The sun stood at guard
while the warmth
of embraces
evoked the final gasps
exhaled from true love’s
final cry
and leaving
shadows on a bed
we will never visit again.

Feb 03, 2013 @ 06:16:24
memories of old embrace expressed so nicely dear
Feb 03, 2013 @ 09:34:17
Thank you sweet lady.
Feb 03, 2013 @ 13:47:39
Wow….you almost leave me speechless. Another wonderful piece.
Feb 03, 2013 @ 13:57:34
Coming from a talented writer like you leaves me speechless! Thank you. Made my day!
Feb 03, 2013 @ 14:04:32
Feb 03, 2013 @ 14:05:48
Likewise.
Feb 03, 2013 @ 16:27:05
intricate, complicated yet raw and basic. Softly woven Millie. spectacular
Feb 03, 2013 @ 16:27:59
Awwww. I am so glad you liked it. I actually deleted twice before leaving it up.
Feb 03, 2013 @ 16:29:07
gasp.. delete? nonsense
Feb 04, 2013 @ 20:02:50
wow, superbly written, I love this piece,,,
Feb 04, 2013 @ 20:11:00
You are so kind. Many thanks. Love and light.
Feb 04, 2013 @ 20:33:44
Exquisite depicting!
I wish I wrote these words:
..
and leaving
shadows on a bed
we will never visit again.
Although I believe you are wrong, you will visit again..
Feb 04, 2013 @ 21:56:15
I have hope and that’s all that matters. Thank you for stopping by and taking time to comment as always. Your perspective is always appreciated.
Feb 04, 2013 @ 22:36:25
There was once a little boy going by a car with his parents. His mother watched him where he was gazing long and intensely out the window, barely not blinking with his eyes.
- What are you staring at, she asked?
- I’m waiting to see the train, he said, because along the road there was a railroad following mile by mile.
- But there is now trains there anymore, the railroad is closed, she said.
The boy then turned his eyes to his mother and said: you can always hope!
Feb 04, 2013 @ 22:54:58
That’s absolutely lovely. Thank YOU for sharing this. I will always remember it.
Feb 05, 2013 @ 03:10:13
Im glad you liked it, have faith in hope ;-.)
Feb 05, 2013 @ 18:12:11
😄